Recount writing

Seed to feed.

When we first started growing our plants we grow them from seeds. I knew they would grow because we looked after them really well.

The seeds were Tomato and some sweetcorn Squash silverbeet and Sunflower and some Bok choy and Basil and Purple Tansy and Butternut and Nasturtium Pansy and some yellow bean and some pumpkin.

Those are for our market and we are going to sell some slippers and clothes too. I think we will get over $100 for our class.  

Number knowledge Stage : 5

                                 I am learning to count forwards  and backwards in 1's and 10's
                                         and    I am learning to read any number up to 100.

     

Te Reo Maori-Kei te haere a ??? ki hea?

WALT ask and answer questions in Te Reo Maori.

Recount Writing - At the pools.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing

17.10.2017

At the pools.

On a Saturday me and my mum and my dad went to the pools in Whangarei.  I felt excited.

When we got to the pools, we got changed and then I went into the hot pools. They were nice and hot. I swam around and had a long soak.

After that I went into the cold pools. I swam to my dad. We had a race in the pool. My dad won the race. It was fun having a race with my dad.

Then we went for a kai. We had some hot dogs. They were delicious.

Persuasive Writing- We should play sport every day.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

19.10.2017

We should play sport every day.

I think we should play sport every day.

Firstly I think we should play sport every day because we will get fit.

Secondly I think we should play sport every day because we will learn how to do some skills kicking the ball and passing.

Another reason why I think we should play sport every day is because we will get lots of oxygen in our body.

Lastly I think we should play sport every day because we will be good team mates.

So that’s why I think we should play sport every day.

Persuasive Writing - We should do homework every night

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

18.10.2017

We should do homework every night.

                  I think we should do homework every night.

Firstly I think we should  do homework every night because we will get smarter.

Secondly I think we should do homework every night because Sit will help us achieve our learning goals.

Another reason I think we should do homework every night is so we can practise our learning.

Lastly I think we should do homework every night is so we can give our brain a workout.

So that's why I think we should do homework every night.

Look at the taonga I made for my Dad.

Happy Father's Day, Dad.

Addition Basic Facts Practice

I have been practising my addition basic facts. I wanted to get faster more accurate. When I started my top score was 24. Today I scored 52. Here are my results.

Recount Writing-At home with Mum and Dad.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

25.07.17

At home with my mum and dad.

On Sunday afternoon I stayed at home with my mum and dad. When I got up I got changed. After I got changed I went for a kai. After my kai I went to play on my game. I tried to race the truck. I felt excellent to race the truck. Then it was Lunch. After I had my Lunch I watched some tv. Then I went to play on my game again. When I was playing on my game I crashed. Then I ran to my dad to ask him what is the time. My dad said, “The time is two

o’clock.” Then I ran back to my game to play again.

Recount Writing-Rippa Rugby

WALT add details to help our readers understand our story.

You can also add interesting words, talking, similes, feelings and thoughts.

I went to rugby.

On Thursday morning my team and I went to the rugby fields to play Rippa rugby.

I felt keen to play.

When we got to the rugby fields we saw lots of other schools. I said to myself, “Wow there are lots of people.”

The first thing I did was I went to put on my tags.    I felt  pumped to play Rippa rugby.

Next  my team and I went for a meeting with the other schools. I said, “I’m ready to play.”

After that our games started. I felt keen to rip the other teams tags.

Later on I went for some lunch. I said, “Wow that game was cool.”

Finally the games finished. I thought it was an amazing day.

Toku Pepeha

I have been learning to say my Pepeha with confidence.

Term 2 Goal Setting.

I have achieved most of my Goals this Term.

Recount Writing-I went to the Park

WALT add details to help our readers understand our story.

I also added interesting words, talking, similes, feelings and thoughts.

I went to the park.

On Sunday afternoon my family and I went to the park in Kaikohe to have fun.

I felt pumped to play on the park.

When we got to the park I saw lots of people. I said, “ Hmmm what should I play on first?”

The first thing I did at the park was to play on the swing. I felt happy and good.

Next I went to play on the slide. I said, “Wow I am going so fast.” I felt super happy.

After that I went to play on the swing again. I felt good.

Recount Writing-At Rugby.

I am learning to add detail so my readers can understand my story.

I am learning to add interesting words to make my story good to read.

26/ 06/17

At Rugby.

On Saturday morning me and my mum and my dad went to Rugby in Kawakawa and it was my  Rugby game. I felt happy and excited.  

When I got to my Rugby game I got changed.

After I got changed I went out on the field. VJ was already on the field. I said to VJ, “Are you ready to play?” VJ said, “Yes.” I felt keen to play rugby.

Then my rugby game started. The Kawakawa team had the first kick. I had the first run. Then VJ ran it up. then my team lost the ball I was ruining my fastest but I could not get him. Then the Kawakawa team kicked the ball off to my team then VJ ran it up that time then I got the ball and I ran it up. Then VJ  got the ball and past the ball to Ady. then I got the ball again and then the game was finished. After the game my team and I went for a shower. After that my team and I got dry. Then I got changed. After my team and I finished getting changed it was time to go for a kai. After I went home. When I got home I went to bed.

It was a cool day.

Google Draw-Mother's day poster.

I am learning to create a poster with an important message and an image

that supports the message.

My poster has an important message for my Mum.

A Portrait of my Mum.

I am learning to use lines, shapes, symmetry and position to create

a portrait of my Mum.

Recount Writing-Going to the Park

I am learning to add more details and interesting words to my writing.

Going to the Park.

On Saturday me and my family went to the park in Kaikohe.

Then when we got to the park I asked my dad if he can   come and play with me but he said no. Then I went to play on the park by myself. Then I said to my mum if she can come to play with me and she said yes. We played tag on the playground area. I played on the swing and my Mum was pushing me. It was fun because Mum was pushing me high. I went to the skate park and I was riding my bike around the bowl. It was fun. Then I did a big as ramp. My bike went high but my dad and my mum said, “Stop doing that it’s too dangerous.” So I stopped going on the ramp.

Then we went to get a kai at MacDonalds. It was nice.

My day was excellent.

Google Draw Poster-Healthy Eating.

Persuasive Writing-Healthy Eating.

I am learning to write my opinion and my reasons.

30.3.17

Healthy eating.

I think we should eat healthy food.

Firstly I think we should eat healthy food because you can have healthy skin.

Secondly I think we should eat healthy food because we will have healthy eyes.

Another reason I think we should have healthy eating is because we can have a healthy body.

Lastly I think we should have healthy eating because so we can have a healthy heart.

So I think we should eat healthy food.

Recount Writing - The Rugby Games

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

20.03.17

The Rugby Games

On Saturday morning I went to my dad and my brothers rugby games. I went with my dad and my brother. First we went to the shop to  

buy a drink. After that we went to the games. When we got there I went to play with my friend. After that my dad's and my brother’s rugby games were on. When the games started I went to watch the games. Then I went back to play with my friend.

Next me and my friend went to watch some of the other games.

I went to get a drink after that I went to play with my friends  again.

After my dad and brother finished their rugby games we had a big kai. I loved the kai.

Recount Writing - Staying at home.

I am learning to write my ideas in order and to add my feelings.

07.03.17

 On Sunday I stayed at home with my mum and dad.

When I stayed at home with my mum and dad first I was playing on my game. My game was cool. I’m getting better at playing it.

After that I went for a kai. It was yummy.

Next I went to go and watch some tv.

Then I went to lie down and have a little rest.

After that my mum and dad called me for another kai.

Next I went to fed the cows and the pigs.

That was a big job and it was hard. But I like feeding the animals.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017.

Persuasive Writing - Rules at School

I am learning to write my opinion and reasons.

14.03.17

Rules at School.

I think we should have Rules at school.

Firstly I think we should have rules  at school

because then people won't get hurt.

Secondly I think we should have rules at school because then everyone will be happy.

Another reason why I think we should have rules at school is because then we won't be a bad school.

Lastly I think we should have rules at school because then our school will not have bullying.

So I think we should have rules at school.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my ideas about my weekend and to add details.

WALT write our opinion with reasons for our persuasive writing.