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Friday, October 20, 2017

Recount Writing - At the pools.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing
17.10.2017
At the pools.
On a Saturday me and my mum and my dad went to the pools in Whangarei.  I felt excited.
When we got to the pools, we got changed and then I went into the hot pools. They were nice and hot. I swam around and had a long soak.
After that I went into the cold pools. I swam to my dad. We had a race in the pool. My dad won the race. It was fun having a race with my dad.
Then we went for a kai. We had some hot dogs. They were delicious.


Persuasive Writing- We should play sport every day.

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.
19.10.2017
We should play sport every day.
I think we should play sport every day.
Firstly I think we should play sport every day because we will get fit.
Secondly I think we should play sport every day because we will learn how to do some skills kicking the ball and passing.
Another reason why I think we should play sport every day is because we will get lots of oxygen in our body.
Lastly I think we should play sport every day because we will be good team mates.

So that’s why I think we should play sport every day.

Persuasive Writing - We should do homework every night

WALT use the correct structure and language for Persuasive Writing.

18.10.2017
We should do homework every night.
                  I think we should do homework every night.
Firstly I think we should  do homework every night because we will get smarter.
Secondly I think we should do homework every night because Sit will help us achieve our learning goals.
Another reason I think we should do homework every night is so we can practise our learning.
Lastly I think we should do homework every night is so we can give our brain a workout.
So that's why I think we should do homework every night.