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I went to the park.
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On Sunday afternoon my family and I went to the park in Kaikohe to have fun.
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I felt pumped to play on the park.
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When we got to the park I saw lots of people.
I said, “ Hmmm what should I play on first?”
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The first thing I did at the park was to play on the swing.
I felt happy and good.
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Next I went to play on the slide.
I said, “Wow I am going so fast.”
I felt super happy.
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After that I went to play on the swing again.
I felt good.
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