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17.10.2017
At the pools.
On a Saturday me and my mum and my dad went to the pools in Whangarei. I felt excited.
When we got to the pools, we got changed and then I went into the hot pools. They were nice and hot. I swam around and had a long soak.
After that I went into the cold pools. I swam to my dad. We had a race in the pool. My dad won the race. It was fun having a race with my dad.
Then we went for a kai. We had some hot dogs. They were delicious.
sup Rangamarama where are you now bro
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